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It is of a lonely figure,
A statue etched so fine:
A little one so helpless,
So saddened, and divine.

That when she came to view it,
She saw what others could not:
Her own face reflected,
Something she'd forgot.

For with the pain came hope,
And with the sorrow, prayer.
And when she could take no more,
She let go of her despair.

She spoke to God and asked of Him,
"Why did you leave me here?"
And He answered her directly:
"It is not I who keeps you there."

She looked into herself then,
For hope and faith her own,
And realized, without a doubt,
Her life was her's alone.

She took what she had left,
A new life her's to form.
So when she gazed upon the state,
She knew from that she had transformed.
©2008-2009 ~ThiefQueenRiyo
:iconthiefqueenriyo:

Author's Comments

Um... Yay, a happy poem! =D?

Haha, lame title, I know.

...Love me, anyway? =]

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:iconlennonsstarr:
I do love this. :3 Kinda reminds me of myself, though I'm not sure I've reached the end. Lovely write. :3

--
Don't get in my way, I've got a score to settle.
The blood I hunt is stain enough on my hands and I don't wish to add yours to it.
Now move, insolent dog, lest your name be added to my list of murders.

~Kiara
:iconerick1011:
I like it :)
The title is alright,
not as bad as you say it is :)
:iconthiefqueenriyo:
Thank you! =]
Good luck reaching that end of yours, if you haven't. ^^

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Sounds of freedom make me want to try.
:iconlennonsstarr:
No problem and thanks. :)

--
Don't get in my way, I've got a score to settle.
The blood I hunt is stain enough on my hands and I don't wish to add yours to it.
Now move, insolent dog, lest your name be added to my list of murders.

~Kiara
:iconthiefqueenriyo:
Thanks! =)
It was the best I could come up with that seemed relevantly fitting.

--
Sounds of freedom make me want to try.
:iconerick1011:
Yeah.
It's alright :D
Try reading my poems ^^
I wrote them yesterday x]
:iconlady-samus:
Oo I like it, it's really nice. =)

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A wallaby in a boat waving a fish... Odd...but strangely appetizing.
:iconthiefqueenriyo:
Thanks! =] ♥

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Sounds of freedom make me want to try.

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